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    dots Submission Name: Huggles 2 Udots
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    Author: catechism42
    ASL Info:    31 / M / Pasadena, TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 5/18/33
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHuggles 2 Udots
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    Milk and honey make me runny
    In the nose, in the ear, in the ass
    In the fridge, better catch it
    Don't let slip away that which
    You anchor yourself to
    For sake of security
    Stave off dark lonely
    Tendrils that seek you out
    In solitude is the grave
    Life is change, movement, integration
    Only dust settles
    It really is ok to love without shame




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