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    dots Submission Name: Eternal Driftingdots

    Author: catechism42
    ASL Info:    31 / M / Pasadena, TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 5/18/33
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsEternal Driftingdots

    Peace once harmoniously whole
    Now countless unwholey pieces
    Caught in cosmic undertow
    Lost in fractured dream of time

    When will wakefulness return
    When will children understand
    Why we are driven to create
    Why we are destined to destroy

    Outside time all is now
    Outside space all is here
    Hand in hand we turn to dust
    And soar within the light

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