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    dots Submission Name: Making Love to the Darknessdots
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    Author: catechism42
    ASL Info:    31 / M / Pasadena, TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 5/18/33
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMaking Love to the Darknessdots
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    There’s something seductive about pain, fear, madness and anger. These sorts of emotions have a strong tendency to feed on themselves and snowball out of control like a lover in the heat of passion. There’s a kind of beauty to be found in tears and gritting teeth, a rapturous allure to the dark places of the soul that pulls at me, begging me to embrace it in the dark, soft void.




    Submitted on 2010-02-17 17:39:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ...the child is grown
    the dream is gone
    and I have become
    comfortably numb...

    ~~~~Pink Floyd



    Yep. That's what this feels like.
    | Posted on 2010-02-18 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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