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    dots Submission Name: I love Youdots
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    Author: CandyCoated
    ASL Info:    13/female/usa
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 625
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 704



    Description:
       i wrote this poem for my boyfriend in math class one day cause my teacher said we had to write LOVE poems in her class...lol why in math? thats kinda weird huh?


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    dotsI love Youdots
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    I've loved you for awhile now
    sometimes i don't know how
    you've stole my heart
    your very kind
    but you've almost
    crushed it several times
    yes, we've had our ups and downs
    but soon they'll take us to our crowns

    you've almost lost me
    several times
    but you came back
    with a few bumpy rides
    you know what to say
    day by day
    your always here
    to enlighten my way

    true love always waits
    it will never hate
    we'll all die
    that day we'll fly to the sky
    to live and eternal life
    of love and not hate




    Submitted on 2010-02-17 19:25:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it very nice but people hate anyway you know
    | Posted on 2010-02-18 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]


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