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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: rubymoon
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 155/162/91
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Love is over written about, etc...


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    dotsLovedots
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    What is love?

    Is it like a fairy tales
    of white knights and princesses
    ...with happily ever afters?

    Or is it like tragedies
    such as the famous Romeo and Juliet
    ...with their misunderstood poison?

    How is love like?

    Is it like the majestic sunrise
    where the rays burst forth
    ...after gently creeping up on you?

    Or is it like the sunset
    where the rays paint the sky
    ...before leaving you with only memories?

    Where is love?

    “It was love at first sight”
    In the eyes?

    “I love him... I just know I do”
    In the guts and heart?

    “I married him because he could cook and clean”
    In the brain?

    Love is love...
    It’s probably different for everyone
    We are born knowing it
    BUT
    we live seeking it




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