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    dots Submission Name: Sigh My Loverdots
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    Author: PrinceOfEvil666
    ASL Info:    16/M/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 4/5/7
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 516
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    Bytes: 535



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    dotsSigh My Loverdots
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    We lay there
    Beneath the cover
    Entwined in each other
    Enveloped by each other
    I sigh out your name
    And kiss your lips
    The taste so sweet
    It explodes in my mouth
    I want us to be like this forever
    I want me to be happy like this forever
    As we lie there
    Circled in each others embrace
    Sigh my lover
    Sigh my name in love
    As I do yours so often
    I lean down and steal another kiss
    Branding this moment forever
    In my heart




    Submitted on 2010-02-18 22:05:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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