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    dots Submission Name: Ai (Translated)dots
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    Author: PrinceOfEvil666
    ASL Info:    16/M/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 4/5/7
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 637
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 460



    Description:
       Most of it gets lost in translation, so I will probably make a better version.


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    dotsAi (Translated)dots
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    Snow
    The snow falls gently
    It builds up
    Higher and higher
    My feeling for you are the same
    Hold me forever
    Never let me go
    Hold me forever
    I don't want you to leave
    You are my life
    But I...
    Am turning back to the darkness
    It is holding me tight
    But I...
    Do love you still
    I now hate the dark
    I never thought
    I could love you the way I do




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      Nice.

    Fana
    | Posted on 2010-02-19 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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