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    dots Submission Name: he can't handle it anymoredots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 719
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 497



    Description:
       to everyone who fxxked with my relationship:
    congrads. you tore us apart.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotshe can't handle it anymoredots
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    Thank you for helping
    do you see what's left of us?
    I stay here and him there
    both of us without any trust.

    I bet you think that your helping
    did you like my tears?
    As I cry I bet you never noticed.
    and I bet he doesn't care.

    So thank you for "helping"
    you got what you were asking for.
    He says he doesn't know if he can take it
    he doesn't know if he can handle it anymore.l




    Submitted on 2010-02-18 22:48:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      he will wait, Beloved One.

    of course he will wait.

    be patient.

    things will work out.


    love and kisses,
    hugz n misses,

    Mummie
    | Posted on 2010-02-23 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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