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Submission Name:
he can't handle it anymore
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Author:
PopRocksRae
ASL Info:
21/ F/ Heaven
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2.49 - 232/369/355
Words:
82
Class/Type:
Poetry/Depressed
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to everyone who fxxked with my relationship:
congrads. you tore us apart.
he can't handle it anymore
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Thank you for helping
do you see what's left of us?
I stay here and him there
both of us without any trust.
I bet you think that your helping
did you like my tears?
As I cry I bet you never noticed.
and I bet he doesn't care.
So thank you for "helping"
you got what you were asking for.
He says he doesn't know if he can take it
he doesn't know if he can handle it anymore.l
Submitted on 2010-02-18 22:48:39
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he will wait, Beloved One.
of course he will wait.
be patient.
things will work out.
love and kisses,
hugz n misses,
Mummie
| Posted on 2010-02-23 00:00:00 | by
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