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    dots Submission Name: Sr. Year at MHSdots
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    Author: Linz
    ASL Info:    24/f/Ne
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 86/118/44
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 940
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    Description:
       yeah i know its really short. This was a poem i just wrote for fun about this last year of school. If you went to Mccook you would understand. (its not ment to piss anyone off!)


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    dotsSr. Year at MHSdots
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    Heading down the hall, the ruler of the school
    Seniors whith heads up high can't believe they rule
    For years there's been soneone higher
    But now WE walk the wire
    With all the little ones to heave out of the way
    This is how it happens, no one has a say
    One single year here left
    We will make it the best!




    Submitted on 2004-07-23 13:54:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It seemed way to stuck up, preppy, and arogant. Other than that it would have been good. Senior always get big heads though.
    Don't let it go to your head, freshman in college aren't that great.
    | Posted on 2004-07-23 00:00:00 | by bloodwing | [ Reply to This ]


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