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    dots Submission Name: old habits die harddots
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    Author: eidolon
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 0/2/10
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 665
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsold habits die harddots
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    It's morning time
    I can tell because
    the patrons
    all have wandering eyes

    We live this way-
    hopscotch
    Weave a web of wide lies

    Love me
    Love you
    I thought I could forget you too

    but you arrived that day
    with that crooked smile
    Let's time travel, you said-
    Let's walk a thousand miles

    I know your poison
    I don't trust your mouth
    but your skin is still soft
    God, I'll die and drift south

    Hell does not scare me
    It sounds warm,
    at least real

    I could melt away this flesh
    With the devil I'll deal




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