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    dots Submission Name: Darlin', Please Say You Won't Go.dots
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    Author: OwlEyes55
    Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 1/2/13
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsDarlin', Please Say You Won't Go.dots
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    Love, love, love.
    "I love you."
    "I love you more than words."
    "I love you so much it hurts."

    "I don't love you."
    "I never loved you."
    "I will never love again."

    The word is tossed about like a frisbee.
    You yell for them to catch it,
    And sometimes they miss it.
    You throw it once again,
    They miss it still.

    "I don't love you like that."
    "I love you more than that."
    Does the word mean anything anymore?

    It does to some people,
    Including typer of this piece.
    Because I love you.

    "Maybe not this way, but definitaly this way."
    That's how I love you.

    The best friend,
    To the worst enemy.
    "I love you this way, but not that way."

    I'm not begging for you to stay.
    I'm not groveling on my knees.
    I'm plainly,
    Simply,
    Asking.

    Will you stay?




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      I really like this one. It is exactly what I think. Except, in different ways. It is very..to the point. And it is open. I really like it. :)
    | Posted on 2010-02-22 00:00:00 | by joeandcassy | [ Reply to This ]


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