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sick


Author: blackdemigod13
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sick



head spinning and my stomach is in pain,
but you know what they say no pain no gain
all i want to do is sleep,
and for everyone to shut up and not say a peep
mom says ill be ok and just to chill,
i have a fever so i have to take a motrin pill




Submitted on 2010-02-21 16:04:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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