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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    29/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 38/59/51
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Misc/The pain inside
    Total Views: 564
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 879



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       just letting out whats on my mind..


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    Why are you so negative?
    always yourself and not another.
    Why must it be "ive not done enough."
    When its clear that something's wrong.
    Its not about you, but its about us.
    Don't take blame for other's behavior.
    You are stronger than that,
    You have to stand, and say it proud.

    "This time im right, and you're wrong."

    Why must you always support the other?
    When i speak of the attitude of them.
    For once support what i say... can you?
    You're always supporting the ones you dont know,
    When you have me always there for you
    When no one seems to care.

    For once, think of my sake,
    i cant always support someone who doesn't support me in return..
    When we talk about where be belong....




    Submitted on 2010-02-22 03:14:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very well structured. I enjoyed the message, as well as how easy it was to read. ^.^ I'd work on capitalization and grammar, but other than that, it was brilliant. I liked how you told someone off, for being a two face. ;) Epicness to you.
    | Posted on 2010-02-22 00:00:00 | by Kitkara | [ Reply to This ]


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