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    dots Submission Name: Just Another Daydots
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    Author: Snowtear
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 3/1/3
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
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    Description:
       I wrote this in 3rd period because i was really bored and I felt like writing something. I kinda just worte down random things and I wanted to see if I could write something that was happy for once.


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    dotsJust Another Daydots
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    3 inches from the fall
    I jerk awake to the beeping of an alarm clock
    I love the sound of my own heart
    Donít call me crazy.
    Please.
    Grab your pom-poms and cheer!
    Reaching to the endless blue sky.
    I should be the one laughing in the end.
    Ugh! Itís a Monday!
    And Iím already in a bad mood. >.<
    (What to do?)
    Sleep during class
    Copy homework from a best friend.
    Itís all the same.
    Please, daring I beg.
    Do something crazy.
    I canít stand this boredom anymore. -_-
    Come on.
    Letís go stare-gazing and whish upon a shooting star.
    Maybe then weíll be whooshed away.
    Grab your pom-poms and cheer!
    Reaching to the endless blue sky.
    I should be the one laughing in the end.
    Sleep in class.
    Copy homework from you dear pal.
    Ugh. -_-
    Itís just another day.




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