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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 754
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    Description:
       My own Epiphany after a bout with the blues.

    Love, Peace, Joy, Grace, Faith!!!


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    I could not see the forest
    for the trees.
    I felt so lost I dropped
    upon my knees...
    I cried to God to share all
    which he sees.
    I stood and heard the forest
    speak to me.
    I saw the trees now different
    "IT" was He!
    I was overcome with Love, yet
    could this be?
    He smiled and my heart was
    filled with glee!
    For by grace and faith we are
    saved for free...
    Both at present and
    through all eternity!




    Submitted on 2004-07-23 15:13:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      we forget, that all things considered, we can't lose our freedom as long as we are connected to the divine. I like your message very much. thanks. nansofast
    | Posted on 2004-10-26 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      This feels like being told about a miracle cure without ever being filled in on what disease you had to begin with. I know you said you had the blues, but I think it could be more interesting if you cared to share, in the verses, how you came to be down and blue in the firt place. Always nice sentiments from you though. Always good at sharing a positive faith.
    Dave
    | Posted on 2004-07-24 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      this was interesting and created a very nice image for me, the ending was perfect for the piece. nice work, you have a great attitude towards everything
    | Posted on 2004-07-23 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]


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