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    dots Submission Name: Questioning the Unveilingdots
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    Author: LenneMitsuki
    ASL Info:    16, Female, Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/0/8
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
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    dotsQuestioning the Unveilingdots
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    When all everyone
    Has ever known is
    A lie, how do you
    Convince them of
    The truth?

    When you have
    Hidden behind a mask
    For most of your
    Life, how do you unveil
    The real you?

    When they discover
    The correct information,
    How can you persuade
    Them to treat you
    The same way?

    When everyone has
    Left you, how will you
    Cope with the loss
    And the heartache
    Once again?

    Is the unmasking really
    Worth the loss of friends




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