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    dots Submission Name: Breaking Awaydots
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    Author: LenneMitsuki
    ASL Info:    16, Female, Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/0/8
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 460
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    dotsBreaking Awaydots
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    In a crowd of hundreds,
    Individualism is banned.
    No one searches any longer
    For the one that will stand out.
    Their eyes scan only for
    How perfect followers must be.
    Blindly ensuing their
    Accepted leaders in everything.
    So let me be the one
    To declare my social freedom.
    I'll proudly stand my
    Ground and turn the other way.
    Follow no longer the
    School of fish in the sea.
    Defiantly, I'll bring
    About the rise of individualism.
    Single-handedly I'll
    Break away from the crowd.
    Live my own version
    Of a perfect life fit for me.




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