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    dots Submission Name: Past, Present, Futuredots
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    Author: LenneMitsuki
    ASL Info:    16, Female, Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/0/8
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsPast, Present, Futuredots
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    Blackened, dead,
    Buried in shadows,
    Here lies the past.

    Who I was,
    Who you were,
    It no longer matters.

    Troubling, hopeful,
    About to end,
    Here waits the present.

    Who I am,
    Who you are,
    It's about to change.

    Bright, distant,
    Bathed in hope,
    Here comes the future.

    Who will we be?
    Doesn't matter.
    We'll have each other.

    Sands of time,
    They'll come and go,
    But I'll still be with you.




    Submitted on 2010-02-23 17:03:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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