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    dots Submission Name: Soldiersdots
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    Author: LenneMitsuki
    ASL Info:    16, Female, Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/0/8
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsSoldiersdots
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    There they are fighting strong,
    Struggling to protect this nation.
    Some believe this war is wrong,
    It only ends in devestation.

    Though I do agree,
    I have to respect
    That it is me
    They're trying to protect.

    So I stand by cheering
    For the soldiers over seas.
    While others sit there jeering
    At hearts they do not see.

    I'll cry for the loved ones
    Whom they may not see again,
    While our president sends tons
    Of more young boys and men.

    And I'll wish for their safe return
    To the land that they fight for.
    Hoping we don't yearn
    For the people that left before.




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