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    dots Submission Name: Shitt fr writngdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsShitt fr writngdots
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    I am not married and why should I be

    I haven't been reserved by any vows

    I love. With intensity that rivals the rising sun,
    and all the energy that can be found in any single breath.

    I grew up in a valley and when I live I want to live there.

    I want to fish and sit for hours at the bottom of a massive tree.

    Couldnt turn back now, not with that smile.
    No one deserves this love but God.





    Submitted on 2010-02-23 18:50:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awesome!
    | Posted on 2010-03-20 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]
      somewhat unusual poem, however, I really, really enjoyed the last 4 lines... thought that they were exceptional!!!
    | Posted on 2010-03-18 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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