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    dots Submission Name: Miss You Heredots
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    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 27/35/37
    Words: 382
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    Description:
       this is for my now Ex.
    it was probably the weirdest breakup.
    we can't see each other dating wise,
    but we're still going to try to do as much as we can to see each other still.


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    dotsMiss You Heredots
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    Your smell is on my clothes, your kiss lingers on my lips,
    My bed is empty, I see you standing by me,
    There in the mirror, but when i look behind me,
    You aren't there.
    Oh how I'll miss your loving stare,
    Looking up at me, your whisper in my ear.
    I still hear the words, you said to me,
    All this reminds me, that you aren't here.

    Your love lingers in the air, a breeze soft and strong.
    Here I am grounded; you swept my feet from under.
    I pray not to dream, for youíll be the star.
    Just as you have been for years.
    I canít say anything but one thing,
    I miss you here.

    I still feel the grace, of your body moving against mine.
    Moving as one, our breath heavy with life,
    I canít hold you against me; youíre to far away,
    The sheets canít cover me, from you not being under,
    Some might say we were a blunder,
    However some are blind, to loveís beauty,
    Your name remains on my lips, yet I dare not say,
    I canít admit; that you arenít here.

    Your love lingers in the air, a breeze soft and strong.
    Here I am grounded; you swept my feet from under.
    I pray not to dream, for youíll be the star.
    Just as you have been for years.
    I canít say anything but one thing,
    I miss you here.

    I canít find the music, to fit the words,
    That you made me want to say, but hell,
    Iíll say Ďem anyway. I spend the time,
    Memorizing every inch, making them all a mile,
    My fingertips traveled across your world,
    The beauty of it I canít describe.
    I canít say that you arenít there,
    Because thatíd be a lie, youíre in my mind,
    My heart, my soul, I would love to say I love,
    But how can I say, when you arenít here?

    Your love lingers in the air, a breeze soft and strong.
    Here I am grounded; you swept my feet from under.
    I pray not to dream, for youíll be the star.
    Just as you have been for years.
    I canít say anything but one thing,
    I miss you dear.





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      yeah the reprogramming thing is really hard.
    | Posted on 2010-10-07 00:00:00 | by SonOfDamascus | [ Reply to This ]
      


    its sorta applicable. i love how this guy talks about break ups.. sometimes girls just dont think about the way breakups affect boys.

    girls can be mean. and confusing. and if i could appologise for all of this on behalf of the whole girl race i would but alas.. i just dont have that bargaining power.

    i guess this break up isnt too horrific in so much as you still seem to be trying to be really good friends which works. but sometimes makes it worse. when theres lines that have been crossed it can be hard to reprogram your body/mind/heart to find a lesser boundary... you know?

    yup. thats all i got.
    | Posted on 2010-03-28 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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