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    dots Submission Name: Woman of the Nightdots

    Author: Mythica
    ASL Info:    17/female/KY USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.79 - 11/31/16
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
    Total Views: 1131
    Average Vote:    4.3333
    Bytes: 350

       I don't know it's random and I liked it. So here you go.

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    dotsWoman of the Nightdots

    Skin like ice
    Voice like a winter song
    Eyes that pierce the Darknees
    Colors vivid and dark
    Teeth sharp and long
    Wit is cunning
    Incredibly strong and fast
    Beautiful beyond compare
    Willing to be there
    A thirst like no other
    She is a woman of the Night
    Love her like no other.

    Submitted on 2010-02-24 11:46:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      Ah! Totally awesome. I feel like there is this longing or something. I like the lines:
    "Voice like a winter song
    Eyes that pierce the Darknees
    Colors vivid and dark"
    I gave it a 'wow' :P
    | Posted on 2010-04-13 00:00:00 | by LaylaViolet | [ Reply to This ]
      man this remiand me of vamprye it made me think of vampyre woman that nice just like twilight girl keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2010-03-05 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]
      from a martial arts enthusiast

    Haloed harlet in the midnight moonlight
    To dance beside your spectral grace
    The fluid motions of your body so tight
    Together we will set the pace

    Misty shadows of towering mountains
    Lakes and streams cool waters flow
    Towards the oceans like shining fountains
    And beauties we'll forever know
    | Posted on 2010-02-26 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this its very good. my favorite line was eyes that pierce the darkness, it was very indepth
    | Posted on 2010-02-26 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]

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