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    dots Submission Name: Stabbing Westward ~ Desperate Nowdots
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    Author: TifaLockheart
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Kansas
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 396
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 899



    Description:
       this song describes my emotions and exactly how i feel at the moment...


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    dotsStabbing Westward ~ Desperate Nowdots
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    I keep breaking all the promises
    That I keep making to myself
    You'd think by now that I'd be over this
    Instead I'm feeling sorry for myself

    So why does everything seem desperate now?
    I should be feeling so alive
    But it feels like something's missing
    Something's wrong somehow

    It feels like something deep inside has died
    So why do I feel desperate now
    Why do I feel like dying?
    Why do I feel desperate now?
    Why do I feel desperate now?

    I keep breaking all the promises
    That I keep making to myself
    But promises mean nothing to me anymore
    Circling the drain
    Spiraling to hell

    So why do I feel desperate now?
    Why do I feel like dying?
    Why do I feel desperate now?
    Why do I feel desperate now?




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