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    dots Submission Name: Wordsdots

    Author: cyberpoet
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 28/18/22
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Excursiating agonizing pain drowning me into sorrow with each word saught out to destroy me. They paralize me and reap my soul to imprisonment and banish the human body to an act of constorstion. Inhumane treatment misleads me and slowly I fall into the imprisonment of hell becoming insane.

    Submitted on 2010-02-25 13:02:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes! Constorstion. You just made my day!

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    | Posted on 2010-03-28 00:00:00 | by lakesblue | [ Reply to This ]

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