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    dots Submission Name: Not Sorrydots
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    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    20/f/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 312/359/124
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 503
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 587



    Description:
       Go for it with the rudeness. im quite used to it!


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    dotsNot Sorrydots
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    I told you from the start
    Not to fall for me
    Because Iíll break youíre fucking heart
    You didnít listen
    So now you blame me
    Because youíre falling apart
    Youíre the one who fell so hard
    I tried to warn you
    But you went on and played your cards
    You acted out so well
    As if I casted YOU for the part
    Iím watching you die
    Watching you wither away
    Wonít say Iím sorry YOU fell for ME
    Or that I NEVER fell for you
    I warned you from the start
    That I would break your heart.




    Submitted on 2010-02-25 15:15:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      veery good think people dont listin very well becusse they fell for someone anyway
    they get hurt blame the person the try to warn them
    i think it very good but you need to add more to it becuse it is very short please be more keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2010-03-05 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]


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