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    dots Submission Name: A Years Gone By and You Dont Love Me at All.dots
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    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    20/f/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 312/359/124
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 427
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 801



    Description:
       About a boy.


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    dotsA Years Gone By and You Dont Love Me at All.dots
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    I canít believe itís been a year,
    And have I once crossed your mind?

    I still think about you so much,
    I still cry every time I do.

    I hate not seeing you,
    Or having you around.

    I miss the way you held me,
    When we were both feeling down.

    I didnít want to let you go,
    So you just walked away.

    I constantly wondered what I did,
    Or if there was anything I could say.

    I wanted to write a million times,
    Even Wanted to call.

    I wish I didnít think about you,
    Or want to see you at all.

    I still love you so much,
    So constantly I fail.

    I canít believe a years gone by,
    And you donít love me at all.




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      i think alot of people do this or feel like this all the time just like i do i cry when ever i think of my dad being gone i relly never got to know him all i know it was a good dad so keep up the good work and it ishard not to think of people
    | Posted on 2010-03-05 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]


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