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    dots Submission Name: Fake Meaningdots
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    Author: cyberpoet
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 28/18/22
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 678
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 329



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    I love you... These words could never sound true from the voice that says i'm unhappy. Pain wellows in my heart a shade of black. Each day a tear spills down, sorrow of what was never real. Reality reeling me in its cruel game of roulette. The blast when the gun explodes finally relieving me of this life I never truey get.




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