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    dots Submission Name: Unhappydots

    Author: cyberpoet
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 28/18/22
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Unhappy with the time I never get.
    Unhappy with all the things I get.
    Never the time I really want or ever had for each thing always seems to be the last. Never spared the time to talk while feeling so lonely and left with thought. Never knowing how lucky they are for being so close yet i'm so far...

    Submitted on 2010-02-26 13:24:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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