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    dots Submission Name: Love Life.dots

    Author: Theophilus
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 116/174/95
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I think i want to get "Love Life" tattooed on my fingers. my broster is finally home and hes thinking about getting a tat. gun. im definitely going to steal it a few times.

    things have just been so crazy lately and yet so dull. but right now, for no reason at all, just the fact that im alive is making me ecstatic, like i just want to call every body i know and jump around yelling into the phone, "GUESS WHAT GUESS WHAT GUUUUEEEESSSSSS WHHHHAAAAATTTT!!! I'm alive man! Can you believe it? Were alive! Both of us. Isnt it great? Doesnt it just make you want to dance?"

    Alright. So. maybe that Frappecino thing is getting to my head i dont know. but i havent written in months and i was excited just to get something down on paper for once. so here it is.

    breath it in and have a nice smile.

    with love. kt

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    dotsLove Life.dots

    I Feel this crazy kind of joy
    Not because anything great
    Happened today or will
    Happen tomorrow or in ten minutes
    But just because today
    I'm alive.
    Can you feel it?
    Its just coursing through me
    Just this ecstasy
    At being alive
    And breathing
    And knowing that
    I have no idea
    Whats going to happen
    Or the next day
    Or in ten minutes
    But its going to be Great.
    I can feel it.
    Its going to be worth it.
    You know?
    Theres nothing in the whole
    Wide and high and deep and tall
    World that isnít beautiful
    At this exact moment

    Its all perfect.

    Submitted on 2010-02-26 21:42:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You hopeful little rainbow you....
    (Optimistic people come out ahead always... or at least, they think they do cuz they're so cracked, the glass is always "half-full")...

    They don't do well at train tracks, for some reason tho. Go figure. Sometimes "Can't" has its place.

    Meanwhile, yes, very positive, so positive it's making my negative melon-soft head twinge... seriously, left temple, where happiness annoys me most... LOL!

    This is lovely, tho, seriously so.

    Re: finger tats, tho.... NEVER (and I repeat NEVER) tattoo words on your fingers. Any letters. Fingers with the designs or henna things, ok, but NEVER put a word on your fingers. Trust me on this one. (No, I never did, but I've seen the ones who do, and it's an ugly outcome, and trust me, men don't think that's a cool thing)... unless you're planning to turn lesbian, cuz lesbians seem drawn to finger-words. Scary, yeah.
    | Posted on 2010-04-19 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      Love it, this is a total embodiment of positivity that tugs at my shoulders each day, reminding me that there is still beauty around and all is not for nothing. The simple yet true way that you wrote this is invigorating to say the least and it inspires me to smile and know that all will be well. I also have not been online in ages and haven't written anything as well, I am sure this ill inspire me to write again. Thanks.
    | Posted on 2010-03-08 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
      this is:


    i always happen upon your enthusiasm at just the right times. so thank you.
    | Posted on 2010-02-27 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]

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