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    dots Submission Name: Praises to My Sweet Kingdots
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    Author: LRRolins
    ASL Info:    17/A/A world you dont own
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 142/140/84
    Words: 366
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsPraises to My Sweet Kingdots
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    Oh,my sweet beautiful Father,I lift thy name on high.
    I sing your praises,but my voice cracks.
    I fall to ground.My tears turn the barren earth to mudd.
    I mourn for the lost,but most impostantly cry for my Father's pain.
    Heart is yearning and aching,my eyes are opened.
    I missed my holy King who holds me in his mighty hands.
    I know not the words of man anymore.
    Sing in a holy tongue,sweet psalms pour from my heart cleasning my ugly mouth.
    Hand stretched high,I feel His touch.
    O sweet and holy father,
    I thank thee with all my heart for opening my eyes again.
    You,only You,could remove the scales from my blindness.
    Now,I,your humble daughter bow here tonight.
    Asking for simple things.
    Only simple things that will scream your wonderous arts.
    Wrench my pride,take it away!!
    I do not want it's sin!
    TAKE AWAY ALL OF ME,MY HEAVENLY WARD!
    I do not want it's filth!
    Keep away the Barbabus' scales and heal my heart in only the way You can.
    Form me,Mold me in a way to where I will only fit in the path you have designated.
    Break the lamb's legs!
    I want to never stray from You,O Bridegroom!
    Let my sing my heart's vows to You forever and forever.
    Break me and remake me.
    Give me my heart's desire,O Lord.
    Give me all of You in exchange for all of me.
    Let me AGAPE You,O Father.
    Not only hold me tight,but give me the strength to hold to You.
    Never letting go!
    Halleulah! Halleulah! You have given me victory in Your wonderous name,El Shaiddah!
    Your embrace greater than precious pearls.
    Your marvelous love more warming than any fire.
    Your wisdom shining more brilliantly than any diamond ever found by man.
    You
    El Shaiddah
    God
    Heavenly Father,Son,and Holy Ghost
    MERCY SEAT
    O how I agape You.
    How I adore you.
    O merciful God.
    O how I love you.
    I want nothing more than to whorship Your name.
    Will my highest praises be enough?
    Let me give to You,my Holy Lord.
    Let me give to You as You give to me.
    All of me for all of You.
    That is my vow forever and ever,Hosiah;Hosanna;El Shaiddah




    Submitted on 2010-02-27 23:02:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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