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    dots Submission Name: Fuckdots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1092/410/117
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 822
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1375



    Description:
       existentially metaphysical retrospectively retroactive


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    dotsFuckdots
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    Lexical littorals , illiterate foal
    Talus and cirque , shore and shoal
    Iconoclast anarchy , vortex knoll

    Climax matrix , vertex peak
    Semantic regalia , flux and seek
    Torrid allusions , own and keep

    Dichotomy paradox , surge and swell
    Primordial integument , purge and fell
    Contiguity confluence , dirge and knell
    Reliquiae requiem , show and tell

    Accession assertion , deliberative need
    Transcendent ascension , expiate seed
    Subordinate ancillary exigency deed
    Subliminal subjunctive sensorium seethe

    Uxorious usury detinue blithe
    Contiguous currency decimate tithe
    Tractive proximity critical lithe
    Delusory phantasm futurity kithe

    Alacritous tactile acuity interstice
    Accidence ambience resonance quipy pith
    Scenario synopsis resilience gist
    Endergonic protensive progressiveness rift
    Prestissimo preterite retroactive gift

    Poignant puissance piquant myth
    Fable fantasticate legend list
    Preternatural gesticulate proclivity pith
    Propensity assimilate diabolical mist

    Bestiality fornicate zooidal kist
    Parenthetical erudite erumpent fist
    Quiescent gossamer lecherous wrist
    Militant mercenary actuator aorist




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      Hi,
    call me crazy, that is a true statement. I am considered a very intelligent person, especially when it comes to the english language. I spend a lot of time explaining the meaning of words to my friends. I love writing poetry, I hope that I am good at it. People enjoy my poetry, and I write a piece now and again that I am proud of. As I read your work and that of others, I feel like a misfit, I feel out of place and out of my league. I'm not sure if I should keep writing. Please send me some feedback and advice.
    | Posted on 2010-05-15 00:00:00 | by mistiekidd | [ Reply to This ]
      thoughts: collapsable relapse decisive stitch

    also; i wish the first two stanzas were four lines so all the others would be a little more accepting. i feel bad for them. unless they did something to deserve being shortchanged? if so, then [censored] them.
    | Posted on 2010-02-28 00:00:00 | by DestroyOhBoy | [ Reply to This ]


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