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    dots Submission Name: ~RiDdLeS~dots
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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 500
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    Description:
       yeah don't ask...or then again...go a head


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    dots~RiDdLeS~dots
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    You wish it away
    Back
    And away again….
    Life could get better
    then worse
    Then better again
    Or not…
    We are our own worst enemy
    Our own hero
    But always our own worst enemy…
    Never more
    But always more than two
    But never more…
    Always something
    That knows nothing
    But something…

    Riddles.




    Submitted on 2010-02-28 12:49:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I have no clue, or any idea period what this means
    and it's safe to say you don't either?
    But I love it for some reason
    idk maybe it's just the structure
    cool write
    | Posted on 2010-03-01 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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