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    dots Submission Name: Phalaxydots

    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1088/407/117
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       exserted protuberance or rather erotica erectile errantry

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    Magical cauldron apomixes connoisseur
    Cephalic phantasmagoria entity obliquitous
    Mystical conjurous conjugal entrepreneur
    Fantasia fantastication phantasm obsequious
    Amorously arduous ardent raconteur
    Ephemeral translucent opulence ubiquitous
    Vanity's sanctimonious temerity saboteur
    Intrepid verve's intriguingly iniquitous
    Sorcerous sabbatical apothegms chauffeur
    Endemic veracities fortuitous elicitous

    Futurity's fatidic fornication kithe
    Ephemeral metaphor semantics flaunts
    Empirical emulation scenarios blithe
    Subjunctive subliminal nostalgias haunts
    Agile articulation acuities lithe
    Analogizing corroborative prolificacy daunts
    Alacritous tactile manipulations writhe
    Numinous syntactical paradigm nonce
    Emanate imminent perdition tithe
    Orotund jaded seal ordinand jaunts

    Overt convection coercions chiaroscuro tempestuous
    Apex crux axis climax matrix torrid
    Manifest objectified enamorous interstice lecherous
    Spurt binge spree spunk protuberance squalid

    Endearingly engendering amore

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      You must so enjoy writing these poems! But I can't comment because I haven't the patience to work through each line with such strenuous atention. I'm a reader for poets who make it a bit easier for me.

    I don't think this is a criticism and I hope you don't mind the comment.
    | Posted on 2011-07-26 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, and when read aloud it's quite a workout on the tongue and lips also. Reminds me of what Zia Zia said about working out the face muscles by repeating AAHH ROOOO BAH.
    | Posted on 2011-03-12 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh yeah, now that's what I am talking about! This combines the best of both worlds...

    While your friends apparently digest upscale words, my own often seem to require things to be spelled out phonetically or at least they seem to appreciate that whether or not it is being accurately understood. They are more about emotion than intellect, rather primitive I'm afraid but extremely faithful in their own direction. If i have time I will spell this particular one out in such a "musical" manner, read it out loud as a treat and hope to not get bitten in their glee.
    | Posted on 2011-03-08 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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