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Submission Name: Little Girl Blue dots

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Author:	poppi
Elite Ratio:	7.47 - 72/55/37
Words:	54

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Little Girl Blue dots

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She's filled with rubber
She's filled with glue
She'll always be something new

She's a break down waiting to happen
She's chaos in the making
Her heart is broken, fingers quaking

She's a liar trapped inside a poor disguise
Don't tell her what to do
She's immune to you

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