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    dots Submission Name: Little Girl Bluedots
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    Author: poppi
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 72/55/37
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLittle Girl Bluedots
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    She's filled with rubber
    She's filled with glue
    She'll always be something new

    She's a break down waiting to happen
    She's chaos in the making
    Her heart is broken, fingers quaking

    She's a liar trapped inside a poor disguise
    Don't tell her what to do
    She's immune to you




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