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Karoke Call


Author: hollowshell
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Ironically, written the night I went to the kareoke.


Karoke Call



I play the Romeo, you play the Juliette.

We harm, you calm,
our feelings seem to glare.
There is no way from here.
I choose when to stare.
You switch, I twitch.

Our feelings live right here.

It starts with the show.
Your good points, that I know.
You smile, I smile.
Watching as we go,

I play the Romeo, you play the Juliette.

I harm, you charm.
Our feelings one sided.
There is no way from here.
Indulgences in a beer.
You leave, I grieve.

No feelings to retrieve.

It starts with the show.
Your good points, I don't know.
You smile, I smile.
Watching as we go.

The situation rectified.
My, sing song, justified.

Kareoke night has come.
Our song, we shall hum.




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