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    dots Submission Name: Samurai of Glassdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSamurai of Glassdots
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    Little witch of the petal fall
    Courageous heart
    And dark porcelain temptress
    Of a lilies art

    What do you know
    What do you see
    As you ponder the ripples
    In the spiritual pool

    What secrets
    Have the millenniums revealed to you

    Wraith of the blue bells
    Fleeting myth between the quiet reeds
    Were you etched by Beardsley
    And by his fete of delicacy
    Something sensual sexual Japanese henati
    Lingers about you

    Little witch of the petal fall
    Brave heart
    You are
    Of the Hokusai lilies art

    What do you perceive
    In those visits you make to the ancient halls
    The library of souls
    Where all our sires have walked

    And why is this kiss
    Pressed so to my lips

    Fairy princess
    Porcelain temptress
    You whisper to me from the depths
    Reminding me of Water Babies

    I sat by a pool
    Clad in the armories of stone
    A solitary sword thrust to the hallowed ground
    And sought to ponder the weariness of the world
    In my search for her, this Holy Grail
    Was destined to lead me
    To you

    Wraith of the blue bells
    Fleeting myth between the quiet reeds
    Your nature calls
    In the Laleek of your dreams
    And speaks its prophecy

    Ever as I was on bended knee
    Knelt before my Queen




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