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    dots Submission Name: Just Stop it ! .................dots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsJust Stop it ! .................dots

    Stop dreaming
    Stop wishing
    Stop thinking

    Stop what ever it is you are doing

    Stop being
    Stop pretending

    Stop hoping

    Stop torturing me

    Stop making me believe
    It could be
    Any other way

    Stop waking me up

    Let me sleep

    Let me go to bed and at least fold in the warmth

    Stop making me think there is another way

    Just stop

    Stop smashing me against your illusions
    Stop hitting me with your promises
    Stop this laughter
    Stop these tears

    Just stop it

    Should I cut you from my chest
    And leave you beating and bleeding on the cold tile floors
    Why not
    Itís all you have ever led me to

    Stop feeling this emptiness
    Stop touching this nothingness
    Stop pretending you know
    Because you donít

    Stop feeling
    Stop weeping
    And for Christ sake, please stop your endless beating

    Stop burning me
    Stop this love you thought should be

    Stop howling
    Stop screaming
    Stop this existence
    You thought to make me live within

    And please
    For Christ sake please
    Stop your endless

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