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    dots Submission Name: bar poem onedots

    Author: leocrates
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 103/34/38
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Story/Love
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    there are old shiny cigarette burns on the ply...
    they slip like fingerprints slip on some compact neon juked box
    trinkets of time encapsulated in makeshift honor
    but only as much as music from the era of recording
    has the world ended so much they would think if the drinks told us to....
    but the billiards would be green felt pools chalked or torn on the corners and at the pay slots ...too many quarters linked up with washington,,, we pay don't we... who cares, thats the idea that the shit moves
    but we grease up pretty lady bartenders...we shove down imports for progress on the day... impossible, the minuscule of the caps and remotes on media over there with one clock at nine twelve, and one clock over there at nine twenty eight. and there is another set of two tubes one the same game and three on the wall or in the maze of mirrors that are dirty with labels,, consume, consume consume...
    bars are only as good as the crowd, the beer is only brew... try the wood... its, lacquered with cigarette stain from eons of eighties, or minutes of after close... if close is real, the mind closes or not.. perhaps the end is not the bottom... cap.

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