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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Memorydots
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    Author: Snowtear
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 3/1/3
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsSweet Memorydots
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    I had a dream that was so clear.
    So gentle and soft.
    That it made me shade a tear.


    There was a voice in that dream.
    It was faint, like the wind.
    It talked to me, but I couldnít hear the words.


    So peaceful and warm
    That it made me realized
    It was the memory that I loved the most.


    You were there by my side
    Holding me close
    You whispered sweet promiseís in my ear.


    A cold sensation on my cheek
    I wake up
    And notice the birds chirping for what seems like the first time.


    With a small smile
    I listen to the sound of my heartís rhythm
    I still have yet to understand what it is that it desires.


    Looking up at a puffy white cloud over head
    Thinking back to my dream
    Iíll send my wish straight to that could.





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