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    dots Submission Name: Bonsaidots
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    Author: ruejacobs
    ASL Info:    39/feminazi/Gehenna
    Elite Ratio:    4.82 - 619/473/167
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsBonsaidots
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    copyright by ruejacobs 3/6/10 7:45 pm


    What do you want
    Oh enigmatic one
    Each cord stretched my limbs
    Further than intended by nature and
    No matter how I tried I couldn’t untie the knots
    I accommodated them finally
    I thought that if I grew to take the shape you desired of me
    I could satisfy you
    So calloused and twisted I bent myself to your will
    And now like any gardener,
    You are dissatisfied with me
    What you actually wanted was the process itself
    And not the result
    How typical and ultimately futile
    Self imposed Sisyphus
    Ceaselessly toiling and testing his wife
    I will cut those cords
    For you I will rebel
    But not in the way you had expected
    Yes, the naked body in the square
    But practicing necrophilia, none-the-less
    How is that for dutiful
    I will heed no man
    Obeisance has never been one of my strong suits
    Twisted as I am
    I can still adapt




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    ||| Comments |||
      I really enjoyed this. Especially the calm tone in the beginning, slowly rising to the argument at the end. Good write!
    | Posted on 2016-10-21 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written. Highly creative and very original. The theme is very good, and I enjoyed reading this.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2010-03-30 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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