Bonsai
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oh....i'm old? HAH!
Bonsai
copyright by ruejacobs 3/6/10 7:45 pm What do you want Oh enigmatic one Each cord stretched my limbs Further than intended by nature and No matter how I tried I couldn’t untie the knots I accommodated them finally I thought that if I grew to take the shape you desired of me I could satisfy you So calloused and twisted I bent myself to your will And now like any gardener, You are dissatisfied with me What you actually wanted was the process itself And not the result How typical and ultimately futile Self imposed Sisyphus Ceaselessly toiling and testing his wife I will cut those cords For you I will rebel But not in the way you had expected Yes, the naked body in the square But practicing necrophilia, none-the-less How is that for dutiful I will heed no man Obeisance has never been one of my strong suits Twisted as I am I can still adapt |
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I really enjoyed this. Especially the calm tone in the beginning, slowly rising to the argument at the end. Good write!| | Posted on 2016-10-21 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ] | Very well written. Highly creative and very original. The theme is very good, and I enjoyed reading this. | Frank. | Posted on 2010-03-30 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ] | |
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