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    dots Submission Name: Warm Fluffy Blanketdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 373
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWarm Fluffy Blanketdots
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    Donít wake me up
    Let me rest inside the safety of this tomb
    Let me sleep
    Let me glide through the promises
    Never meant to keep

    Let me hide
    Behind the scalpels edge of plastic surgery
    Make me smile
    While I fill the ravenous need
    Spending all my time making
    And spending money
    Believing in the promises
    Of the things I donít need

    And as I sit here in this numb sublime
    The propaganda tells me all the time

    Go back to sleep
    This warm fluffy blanket is all you need
    Here take another pill
    No its not you, itís the world thatís ill
    Go back to sleep

    Forget the world
    You have your own hungry mouths to feed
    Be content with what youíve got
    Donít be concerned with other peopleís greed
    Kill your conscience off
    With more T.V

    I need to sleep
    Let me curl up in the comfort of my prison womb
    Intravenously everything will come
    Let me dream of porn stars
    And bigger breasts
    Beauty enhancements and nine-inch cocks

    Let me roll giant spliffs
    And cruise the streets in stretch limo cars
    As I ride on the electrical appliance paradise
    As I keep wishing for all the things I just donít have
    Cocaine addiction and everything I can grab
    Let me forget about the world outside
    And go to sleep

    Go back to sleep
    This warm fluffy blanket is all you need
    Here take another pill
    You know itís you, and not the world thatís ill
    Go back to sleep

    Let yourself drown in the stupors of luxury
    Convince yourself
    Let yourself believe
    In this construction, in this edifice
    Pumped like oil into your veins
    Forget the world
    You have your own hungry life to feed
    Be content with what you have
    Donít be concerned with other peopleís greed
    Just kill yourself
    Kill your conscience off
    With more T.V

    And as I sit here in this numb sublime
    The propaganda tells me all the time
    The freedom free is already mine

    But the truth is itís slavery
    And I can see
    So just go back to sleep
    Go back to sleep





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