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    dots Submission Name: Glass Ornamentdots
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    Author: LenneMitsuki
    ASL Info:    16, Female, Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/0/8
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsGlass Ornamentdots
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    Carefully hand-crafted from
    The finest crystal and
    Painted vibrant colors.

    Fashioned matchlessly for
    Each individual to help
    Them stand apart.

    Some pin them upon their
    Sleeves for everyone to see,
    While others hide them away.

    Tiny glass ornaments,
    So fragile and easily destroyed,
    And yet treasure beyond their worth.

    Handed out like candy,
    Then tossed away like
    Useless pieces of art.

    Until they're given to the
    Wrong people and smashed
    Beyond recognition or repair.

    Salvage the pieces and
    Collect the cuts, little
    Loved heart won't be the same.




    Submitted on 2010-03-07 10:57:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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