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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/806/391
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 453
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 706



    Description:
       From my upcoming short story novel "STEPHAN" March 16th 2010


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    There comes a time
    When we have to make decisions
    That would reflect on us
    For making that decision
    Each and everyone of us makes choices
    That comes in our favor
    Than there’s the ones that don’t
    A decision we’d come to regret later
    But what I feel could never be confused
    Could never be explained
    A feeling of happiness, excitement all fused
    In four letters straight
    This is what I am feeling
    This is what I do know
    That I love you so much
    That I could never let go
    A decision I proudly made
    A regret worth living for
    You are all I ever wanted
    And more…

    S.H.




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