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    dots Submission Name: sheer irrelevancydots
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    Author: silentpoison
    ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204/259/118
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 468
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 496



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    old ghosts

    haunting ever fervent dreams

    a requiem of irrelevancy

    leave me to my wanderings

    and my imagery

    let me cry

    without your face in my mind

    what you’ve done

    what i did

    my life of lies

    squandered

    ousted

    revealed

    let me go

    to know no boundary

    to know no leave




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