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sheer irrelevancy


Author: silentpoison
ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204 /259 /118
Words: 67
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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sheer irrelevancy



old ghosts

haunting ever fervent dreams

a requiem of irrelevancy

leave me to my wanderings

and my imagery

let me cry

without your face in my mind

what you’ve done

what i did

my life of lies

squandered

ousted

revealed

let me go

to know no boundary

to know no leave




Submitted on 2010-03-08 01:46:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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