Arsony, Just to roast a marshmellow

Author: silentpoison ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204 /259 /118 Words: 82

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Arsony, Just to roast a marshmellow

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Save me Before i hit the wall again, face it all again Stop me before i misinterpret this life we live Sane again, Along time coming To loose it all Yet, What kind of Crazy would I be If i understood A deep breath to relax, the smokers lungs to a halting Inhale substance to retain sustinence I would burn it all down just to watch and be a little warmer

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This is nice little one here.Lol.It has a disguise in my opinion.It seems like your referring to a relationship of some sort that you want to just burn away, gasolined downed rather than going along with and wound up hurting yourself.I felt thats what it says.The title has its point to draw in.It focuses on you more thsan anything esle though.There are more I's than we's.Which is completely understandable for me because that comes with venting.Which was exactly what you were doing at first here, venting.Nice little right that makes one think of precautions. RG

| Posted on 2010-09-16 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]

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