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    dots Submission Name: Spring; no miracle here ( the intensity of buds )dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsSpring; no miracle here ( the intensity of buds )dots
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    Iím not going to sit here and write another poem about spring
    As if this year I could capture and define
    Its meaning

    As if this year the season will be changing
    And my perception of time is defined by its passing

    Another chorus and cavalcade of beauty is emerging
    Another awakening

    Descriptions lose it in the bland mediocre
    Of capturing its colour
    Nor do they grasp the intensity of buds

    It is another year marked by procession
    And another year when its heart will not be captured

    It will fall away
    With all the promises of summer

    Moments forgotten in shopping malls
    Or driven by diesel into the same mindless fall
    Romanticised to the burgeoning of wonderful

    What should I do
    Type out more words of sheer continuance

    Did last spring have anything more
    Or did I lose it as this one will end

    And never grasp the intensity of buds

    It is the death of leaves being born
    The withering of flowers

    And all their beauty
    Their captured expressions of life
    Chemistry, formulation, growth, purpose and invincible

    To be reduced to a poem
    A greeting card of spring









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