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    dots Submission Name: SCREAMdots
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    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    20/f/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 312/359/124
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 421
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 883



    Description:
       Just wrote it.
    I know it dont make much sense at all.
    But screaming always makes me feel better.


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    dotsSCREAMdots
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    Scream, Scream as loud as you can,
    Scream until your lugs hurt,
    Scream until you cry,
    When it all begins to hurt SCREAM,
    Scream it all out loud,
    Scream until your throat scratches,
    Scream until your head hurts,
    When your feeling alone, Scream how you feel.
    Scream when your in love,
    Scream in pain and anger,
    Scream just to get it all out,
    When you just cant scream anymore,
    Will you feel better?
    Scream until your heard,
    Scream until your lungs drop,
    Scream until your heart stops,
    And just when the headache sets in SCREAM,
    Scream until every thing's so sore,
    Scream at nothing,
    Scream into the wind,
    Now that your lungs are empty,
    Now that your heart feels better,
    Now that your headache is gone,
    How do you feel?




    Submitted on 2010-03-08 09:35:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I scream to get out emotion and anger etc
    when I'm mad or just too hyper
    I also scream for icecream
    | Posted on 2010-03-08 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      i dont realy get it but good i remand me of a movie called scream
    | Posted on 2010-03-08 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]


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