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    dots Submission Name: Cling Filmdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 335
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsCling Filmdots
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    Gold plated stilettos lots of hair
    No wrinkles
    And enormous boobs

    Flowers
    Chocolates
    Houses and cars

    Now thatís what I call romance

    Cling film
    Polyfiller fill up the cracks
    Lets have sex
    Fuck the arguments

    Yer
    Thatís what I call romance

    Another self-fulfilling reality
    My chance and my way to be
    Just give me
    And give me and carry on give me
    Bouquet and security

    Ah sweet darliní romance me

    Good times
    Fun times and valentines
    I can count how many times you can make me come

    So darliní
    Sweet baby
    Romance me

    Pour your heart out on me
    And letís see if you are worthy
    Go on baby
    Romance me

    Let me dine on the feast of your attention
    While I give you
    None of my own
    Feed my ego
    Feed my
    Feed me

    Show me you limp dick prick
    What a man you are
    Romance me

    Squirt me bubbles of desire
    Tell me
    I am
    The one who sets your life on fire

    Let me judge you
    With my political and cultural
    Point of view
    And in my coldness
    Be responsible for everything you do

    Ah go on honey
    Romance me

    I can fall at your knees
    I am weak
    I can fall at your feet
    And be everything you need
    Just donít ask me
    To take responsibility
    I am woman
    You are man
    And everything in this world
    Is your fault

    Just romance me
    Even though I am painted
    And 90% plastic surgery
    Just let me feed
    While I give up on love
    For money and security
    Yer baby
    Romance me

    Let me sell you my sex
    Let yourself be used and abused
    Let me show you how strong a woman can be
    Buy my pornography
    Equal partners
    Are you fucking kidding me

    Ah..

    But go on honey

    Romance me







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      Thank you so much for the beautiful comment you left. The Prophet just got added to my list of books to read (thank you for that)

    As for this, well, in life there are these type of women: the ones who take without giving, and those who give without tearing pieces of you away from yourself. But you've captured this plastic woman with a dark humor that I rather enjoyed.

    The first three lines drew me in. When I read "No wrinkles/And enormous boobs" I laughed out loud. Couldn't help myself. You gave yourself away with that one, and I was intrigued to see where you went with it.

    I know you've put it under the serious category, but your sarcasm is contagious and uplifting. I've always enjoyed what you've posted, and this one is another reason why I continue to read your work. Write on, friend.
    | Posted on 2010-03-08 00:00:00 | by Celeste J. Bell | [ Reply to This ]


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