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    dots Submission Name: A Mother's Lovedots
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    Author: trynfinity
    ASL Info:    38/f/California
    Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 149/145/91
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
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    Description:
       The importance of loving your children


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    dotsA Mother's Lovedots
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    I love my children dearly
    as every mother does.
    I try each day my hardest
    not because I have to
    .....it's just because.

    I may not be near perfect
    or meet there every want.
    And I try to tell them everyday
    I'm honored to be their mom.

    And there is no book or manual
    that lays down how to be.
    And the people that I looked up too
    they broke a lot of me.

    So judge me as a single person
    by my actions as a mom.
    Remeber that I give my best
    but sometimes I will be wrong.

    See you are my children and my angels
    the perfect in my life.
    I want for you to have that love
    unconditional warm and bright.

    To never question if they are loved
    or a mistake they can't take back.
    But to love them for who they are
    Perfect will all the cracks.

    There is nothing more important
    than how a mother loves her kids.
    It gives them what they need in life
    it's the strength they need to win.

    So if you are a mother
    and you question if you've done your best
    Grab up all your children
    hold them to your chest.

    Tell them how much you love them
    that you're proud of who they are.
    Everyday make sure you tell them
    no matter how near or far.





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