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    dots Submission Name: The Pain of Inkdots

    Author: trynfinity
    ASL Info:    38/f/California
    Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 149/145/91
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Lostfriend
    Total Views: 519
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       The effect that what we write sometimes has on the people we love who read it. In spite of our intentions when we wrote it.

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    dotsThe Pain of Inkdots

    I never meant to hurt you
    when the ink flowed from my pen.
    Never meant to scar your heart
    with the thoughts trapped inside my head.

    I never thought it mattered
    or would affect the ones who cared.
    I just needed a way to sort it
    this burden not meant to be shared.

    You used to find in this ink such pride
    in the words that from me flowed.
    Reading all the things I wrote
    it was a pride I had never before known.

    Now when my pen takes up again
    and the ink begins to write.
    I'm careful and I'm weary
    of the pain that it brings to life.

    Unsure of how to sort my mind
    from the truth and from my fear.
    Will I forever scar this man
    with the ink that flows so clear.

    Submitted on 2010-03-08 09:54:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow if this an't talent then i don't know what is i love the title

    | Posted on 2010-10-31 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      dag....aint that the truth....
    | Posted on 2010-03-10 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought it was good and totally got what you are
    saying, I felt like you held back and that there is a lot more to this. Never let people's opinions or feelings limit your art, after all it's your gift and your release and time to vent! Hope life treats you
    well and that you really let go and it shows in your writing!
    mistie d kidd
    | Posted on 2010-03-09 00:00:00 | by mistiekidd | [ Reply to This ]

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